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tried to find a font like "the birds" font, to try it out, I don't think it works very well though.

a simpler one. I think this works pretty well, but I'll print it out and see.

the placement in this corner works quite well, because it adds to the dynamism of the diagonal.

all of it up the top? I'm not sure exactly what I want the tagline to be, which makes it hard. I need outside advice.

this makes your eyes go straight down and across instead of diagonally - it divides the dynamic line which makes it not work as well.

this works well too, and almost lines up with the bottom of the image. I don't think it's dynamic enough though?

I actually am really liking this one with text? the negative space is nice. Though I'm not sure if the placement of the text works - the asymmetry is nice but I think the hierarchy is off.

aligning with the eye?

a more elaborated headline? maybe too much text squashed in the corner there. it's nice that it's all (the black bird too) coming from the right hand side, with lots of space on the left.

an inverted version, a different headline? not sure.