headline is too small, a bit lost here.
not centered? it looks good but not in relation to the rest of the poster, which is centered.
lowered the type a bit, and made it bold oblique. this stands out a lot more and has more emphasis.
(but was a bit too low, I pulled it up a bit)
-headline's too long
more direct?
-I think I like this better (with 'it's hard') because it appeals more to the emotions? eg is talking about how it affects someone.
-too short probably
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